Comments on: Chapter 6: I’d Have Baked a Cake – part 1 http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/06/23/chapter-6-id-have-baked-a-cake-part-1/ Two psychics, one mega-corp, and all-around bad behavior Wed, 01 Sep 2010 22:32:59 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: Michael unValentine http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/06/23/chapter-6-id-have-baked-a-cake-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-436 Michael unValentine Sun, 04 Oct 2009 16:21:13 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=408#comment-436 Shane's just come across as he always has thus far; with duplicity. Sure, he was a 'gentleman' covering her up, but an alt. motive lurks lol, he's removed her beautiful body from view "out of sight, out of mind", dulling his attraction towards her-- while at the same time attempting to ramp up her attraction towards him by showing his "morning glory". sarcasm on\\ He's not conceited... he's convinced!" //sarcasm off lol Shane’s just come across as he always has thus far; with duplicity.

Sure, he was a ‘gentleman’ covering her up, but an alt. motive lurks lol, he’s removed her beautiful body from view “out of sight, out of mind”, dulling his attraction towards her– while at the same time attempting to ramp up her attraction towards him by showing his “morning glory”.

sarcasm on\\ He’s not conceited… he’s convinced!” //sarcasm off

lol

]]> By: Alexandra http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/06/23/chapter-6-id-have-baked-a-cake-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-90 Alexandra Wed, 24 Jun 2009 03:39:43 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=408#comment-90 Always an interesting twist! :) Always an interesting twist! :)

]]> By: Eonknight http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/06/23/chapter-6-id-have-baked-a-cake-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-88 Eonknight Wed, 24 Jun 2009 01:22:28 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=408#comment-88 True, except maybe to himself when shaging Joon... Again, I'm eager to see how that will play out. :-) True, except maybe to himself when shaging Joon…

Again, I’m eager to see how that will play out. :-)

]]> By: nancy http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/06/23/chapter-6-id-have-baked-a-cake-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-85 nancy Tue, 23 Jun 2009 22:41:25 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=408#comment-85 S'alright. It's an odd phrase. Thanks for your feedback. Yeah, the dream/reality transition could be improved. I'll have to take a look at it later when it's not fresh in my head. Also, I don't think Shane's lied yet. He's sure schemed and manipulated a bunch, though! S’alright. It’s an odd phrase.

Thanks for your feedback. Yeah, the dream/reality transition could be improved. I’ll have to take a look at it later when it’s not fresh in my head.

Also, I don’t think Shane’s lied yet. He’s sure schemed and manipulated a bunch, though!

]]> By: nancy http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/06/23/chapter-6-id-have-baked-a-cake-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-84 nancy Tue, 23 Jun 2009 22:39:16 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=408#comment-84 Hee hee. All will be revealed... eventually. :) Hee hee. All will be revealed… eventually. :)

]]> By: Eonknight http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/06/23/chapter-6-id-have-baked-a-cake-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-83 Eonknight Tue, 23 Jun 2009 17:51:12 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=408#comment-83 Never mind the "stocking feet" comment... just found out exactly what it means, and you have it right. Sorry for being ignorant... :-) Never mind the “stocking feet” comment… just found out exactly what it means, and you have it right. Sorry for being ignorant… :-)

]]> By: Eonknight http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/06/23/chapter-6-id-have-baked-a-cake-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-82 Eonknight Tue, 23 Jun 2009 16:03:47 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=408#comment-82 Interesting... So Shane is conducting an "experiment" that involves, ultimately, getting Addison to fall in love with him. Plus, he shows he can be a gentleman by covering the woman's modesty in a time of confusion... For a scheming liar, he's showing a very tender side... that's dangerous: Addison is neither stupid, nor trusting, and she'll definitely suspect foul play. Can't wait to see how that plays out. On another note: "Padding quietly in stocking feet" IN or ON stocking feet? Also, the transition from dream to reality does not quite work for me... I feel there is something missing between the 10th paragraph's first line ("Then Harris tensed") and the "What...". Interesting…

So Shane is conducting an “experiment” that involves, ultimately, getting Addison to fall in love with him. Plus, he shows he can be a gentleman by covering the woman’s modesty in a time of confusion…

For a scheming liar, he’s showing a very tender side… that’s dangerous: Addison is neither stupid, nor trusting, and she’ll definitely suspect foul play.

Can’t wait to see how that plays out.

On another note:
“Padding quietly in stocking feet” IN or ON stocking feet?

Also, the transition from dream to reality does not quite work for me… I feel there is something missing between the 10th paragraph’s first line (“Then Harris tensed”) and the “What…”.

]]> By: daymon http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/06/23/chapter-6-id-have-baked-a-cake-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-78 daymon Tue, 23 Jun 2009 15:27:20 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=408#comment-78 Well now, that is interesting way to wake up. Not to mention in the wrong room, I wonder how Harris got in there to begin with. Poor Shane getting all kinds of mixed signals. Well now, that is interesting way to wake up. Not to mention in the wrong room, I wonder how Harris got in there to begin with.

Poor Shane getting all kinds of mixed signals.

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