Comments on: Chapter 6: I’d Have Baked a Cake – part 3

By: nancy

nancy — Fri, 10 Jul 2009 17:39:52 +0000

I had to look up Mr. Rossi. You’re educating me in all things motorcycle.

By: Sophie

Sophie — Wed, 01 Jul 2009 14:35:40 +0000

This could be Valentino Rossi, as opposed to the Timelord :p But I’m not sure whether MotoGP champions have time to read teh intarwebs

By: nancy

nancy — Wed, 01 Jul 2009 13:24:49 +0000

What Vanessa said. Thanks, Doctor! Give Cap’n Jack my regards.

By: vanessa

vanessa — Wed, 01 Jul 2009 12:10:51 +0000

Wow! We’ve really hit it big … traversing time and space for our little story to be read!

Thanks for the kind words and for stopping by and reading.

By: The Doctor

The Doctor — Wed, 01 Jul 2009 02:18:55 +0000

Oh this is brilliant, it’s beautiful. You two are clever that’s what you are. I can ACTUALLY feel the difference between the two main characters. Ahhhh this is good, you two are good. If I wasn’t in the room I’d even say it’s genius.

By: vanessa

vanessa — Tue, 30 Jun 2009 14:02:47 +0000

Glad you’re enjoying Addison’s reactions. They’re not so much fictional as drawn from real life. Been there, done that, bought the t-shirt, got the stretch marks and the sleepness nights.

Thank you for the kind words, however. Please enjoy and keep right on reading

By: vanessa

vanessa — Tue, 30 Jun 2009 13:56:17 +0000

Thanks for the correction, Sophie! I do (did) my best with weekly dosages of BBCAmerica and British films, but plenty falls/fell through the cracks, I’m sure. The feedback, corrections and suggestions are ALWAYS appreciated.

By: nancy

nancy — Tue, 30 Jun 2009 13:45:11 +0000

Yay, Soph’s reading!

Thanks for the Brit-pick. I changed it to “dropped off.”

For those of you who don’t know, Vanessa and I are American, so we’re doing the best we can with the British slang. Hooray for Doctor Who! Corrections and suggestions are welcome.

By: nancy

nancy — Tue, 30 Jun 2009 13:42:25 +0000

*headdesk* I'm terrible with lie/lay/laid etc. One day I will learn! Anyhoo, thanks for pointing that out. According to this page, it should be "lay." I've made the correction. Thanks for your kind words. All of those regarding Addison's behavior go to Vanessa. Addison is her character. Glad you're enjoying the story!

By: Sophie

Sophie — Tue, 30 Jun 2009 13:16:38 +0000

She did it again! *bwahahaha* Well, if Myers hasn’t already figured out that she can teleport, he will soon enough.. probably checking the CCTV or something

One thing though – “If not for her mental awareness she’d have thought he’d kipped off.” I know you’ve been using a lot of British slang, very well too, but I’ve never heard “kipped off”. A kip is definitely a nap, and you can have a kip or be kipping, but “kipping off” is a new one on me. Maybe “dropped off” instead?

Also, know I’m useless at leaving feedback, but I really am enjoying this