Comments on: Chapter 6: I’d Have Baked a Cake – part 4 http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/07/03/chapter-6-id-have-baked-a-cake-part-4/ Two psychics, one mega-corp, all around bad behavior Tue, 02 Aug 2011 01:22:20 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: nancy http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/07/03/chapter-6-id-have-baked-a-cake-part-4/comment-page-1/#comment-119 nancy Tue, 07 Jul 2009 21:22:30 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=480#comment-119 *facepalm* Thanks for catching those! You're the unofficial SLB copy editor. :) *facepalm*

Thanks for catching those! You’re the unofficial SLB copy editor. :)

]]> By: Eonknight http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/07/03/chapter-6-id-have-baked-a-cake-part-4/comment-page-1/#comment-117 Eonknight Tue, 07 Jul 2009 19:36:25 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=480#comment-117 Riveting! Two things: Fourth paragraph: "was it was kind of cool"... one "was" too many? Second last paragraph: "Addison knew wouldn't..." missing a "she"? Riveting!

Two things:
Fourth paragraph: “was it was kind of cool”… one “was” too many?

Second last paragraph: “Addison knew wouldn’t…” missing a “she”?

]]> By: daymon http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/07/03/chapter-6-id-have-baked-a-cake-part-4/comment-page-1/#comment-115 daymon Tue, 07 Jul 2009 18:37:14 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=480#comment-115 Well now, looks like things have been interesting for both of them. At least Myers isn't going to react to badly to her teleporting. Better that than the company messing with you any day. Now will he be awake or not when she gets there. Well now, looks like things have been interesting for both of them. At least Myers isn’t going to react to badly to her teleporting. Better that than the company messing with you any day.

Now will he be awake or not when she gets there.

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