Comments on: Chapter 6: I’d Have Baked a Cake – part 8

By: nancy

nancy — Tue, 21 Jul 2009 13:50:59 +0000

Aww, Lexie, thanks! It’s good to hear that you’re getting sucked into the story. Vanessa and I can be hopeless romantics.

As for peer-feedback, it’s always welcome, but not necessary. You’re a busy woman, so please don’t feel obliged.

By: nancy

nancy — Tue, 21 Jul 2009 13:49:31 +0000

If you didn’t like this part, you’ll hate part 9. Consider yourself warned.

By: nancy

nancy — Tue, 21 Jul 2009 13:48:34 +0000

Thanks, Lori!

By: Alexandra

Alexandra — Tue, 21 Jul 2009 01:56:24 +0000

Yaaay! I am all caught up on the story after 2 weeks away from it. What a nice, juicy LONG segment. I know you like feedback, but I was totally lost in the storyline (sorry–I’m a hopeful romantic), which is a GOOD thing.

I promise I’ll put my peer-feedback hat on at the next reading.

I really love where this story is headed! Can’t wait for the birth, and if it’ll be way different from a human one.

By: JDR

JDR — Mon, 20 Jul 2009 12:59:08 +0000

The last thing I expected was for Shane to get EMO.

By: Lori

Lori — Sat, 18 Jul 2009 20:02:53 +0000

I loved it! It’s very sweet that they’re both shy about each other, but I don’t think he’s got anything to worry about as far as Addison accepting his non-human side.

After all, she’s not exactly an ordinary woman! Great stuff!!!!!

By: Soph

Soph — Sat, 18 Jul 2009 07:17:24 +0000

*tea!splat* Classic!

By: nancy

nancy — Sat, 18 Jul 2009 01:23:35 +0000

ROTFL! Mujaki, that comment made my day.

By: Mujaki

Mujaki — Fri, 17 Jul 2009 22:42:12 +0000

And someday in the years ahead, they’ll have a father and son talk about the birds and the bees and the high frequency plasma radiance.

By: daymon

daymon — Fri, 17 Jul 2009 19:00:16 +0000

Well Addison knew that he was different, now she knows just how much. And that Shane will have to help their son with understanding somethings. That is probably a tough pill to swallow.