Comments on: Chapter 7: Deliverance – part 1 http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/07/28/chapter-7-deliverance-part-1/ Two psychics, one mega-corp, all around bad behavior Tue, 02 Aug 2011 01:22:20 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: nancy http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/07/28/chapter-7-deliverance-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-192 nancy Sat, 01 Aug 2009 18:14:35 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=609#comment-192 Yeah! Take that, Y-chromosome types! ;) Yeah! Take that, Y-chromosome types! ;)

]]> By: nancy http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/07/28/chapter-7-deliverance-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-191 nancy Sat, 01 Aug 2009 18:14:10 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=609#comment-191 Thanks, Anak! Vanessa and I are glad you're enjoying our twisted little tale. I went back and looked, and you're right. The segue between chapters 5 and 6 is pretty much nonexistent. To be honest, I couldn't think of anything interesting happening in between, so I jumped ahead. This is the first long-form story I've written that takes place over more than a few weeks, so I'm figuring it out as I go. Please keep the comments coming! Thanks, Anak! Vanessa and I are glad you’re enjoying our twisted little tale.

I went back and looked, and you’re right. The segue between chapters 5 and 6 is pretty much nonexistent. To be honest, I couldn’t think of anything interesting happening in between, so I jumped ahead.

This is the first long-form story I’ve written that takes place over more than a few weeks, so I’m figuring it out as I go. Please keep the comments coming!

]]> By: nancy http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/07/28/chapter-7-deliverance-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-190 nancy Sat, 01 Aug 2009 18:11:00 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=609#comment-190 Only the crazy ones. ;) Only the crazy ones. ;)

]]> By: nancy http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/07/28/chapter-7-deliverance-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-189 nancy Sat, 01 Aug 2009 18:10:37 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=609#comment-189 You and me both! :) You and me both! :)

]]> By: nancy http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/07/28/chapter-7-deliverance-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-188 nancy Sat, 01 Aug 2009 18:04:12 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=609#comment-188 The thought of Shane passed out on the floor makes me giggle. The thought of Shane passed out on the floor makes me giggle.

]]> By: Lori http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/07/28/chapter-7-deliverance-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-182 Lori Sat, 01 Aug 2009 07:08:02 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=609#comment-182 Too bad they can't all... um... experience the true meaning of LABOR, lol! Too bad they can’t all… um… experience the true meaning of LABOR, lol!

]]> By: Anak http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/07/28/chapter-7-deliverance-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-179 Anak Thu, 30 Jul 2009 00:28:57 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=609#comment-179 New reader..loving it so far..though i do have to say it seemed like quite an abrupt change from the end of chapter 5 to chapter 6... i kept looking around to see if i some how missed a chapter. New reader..loving it so far..though i do have to say it seemed like quite an abrupt change from the end of chapter 5 to chapter 6… i kept looking around to see if i some how missed a chapter.

]]> By: Mujaki http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/07/28/chapter-7-deliverance-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-178 Mujaki Wed, 29 Jul 2009 12:22:16 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=609#comment-178 Well, there is the old 1950s trope, father-to-be nervously pacing in THE WAITING ROOM, chain-smoking cigarettes like a belt-fed machine gun. Nowadays, the father is oft present at the delivery, even asked to cut the umbilical. Good to see that in the future, fathers can choose to be even more involved in the birthing process, heheheheh. Well, there is the old 1950s trope, father-to-be nervously pacing in THE WAITING ROOM, chain-smoking cigarettes like a belt-fed machine gun. Nowadays, the father is oft present at the delivery, even asked to cut the umbilical. Good to see that in the future, fathers can choose to be even more involved in the birthing process, heheheheh.

]]> By: ISIS http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/07/28/chapter-7-deliverance-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-177 ISIS Wed, 29 Jul 2009 03:12:28 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=609#comment-177 I'd a left ..go get a drink and watch a game I’d a left ..go get a drink and watch a game

]]> By: daymon http://www.strangelittleband.com/2009/07/28/chapter-7-deliverance-part-1/comment-page-1/#comment-176 daymon Tue, 28 Jul 2009 17:05:28 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=609#comment-176 Yeah it would take a nurse made of some sturner stuff to help Addison. Getting slapped and punched by air tends to raddle people. Good of Shane to help Addison with her pain, at least he hasn't run screaming yet from the room. That's a lot of pain to share, and one men don't have. Of course Shane could faint anytime now from the pain. Yeah it would take a nurse made of some sturner stuff to help Addison. Getting slapped and punched by air tends to raddle people.

Good of Shane to help Addison with her pain, at least he hasn’t run screaming yet from the room. That’s a lot of pain to share, and one men don’t have. Of course Shane could faint anytime now from the pain.

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