Comments on: Chapter 7: Deliverance – part 15

By: Eonknight

Eonknight — Thu, 17 Sep 2009 13:46:09 +0000

Oh, I think they’ll hurt each other plenty, but they’re both more than capable to take whatever the other can dish out… I’m more worried for Carlyle and the other chairpeople when Shane and Addison realize that they’re being manipulated…
THAT is going to be good! *wicked grin*

By: Mujaki

Mujaki — Wed, 16 Sep 2009 04:39:54 +0000

Well, yes, but that’s because it’s the author’s JOB to make their characters go through hell via the scenic route, and make sure they bring back pictures and souvenirs.

By: nancy

nancy — Tue, 15 Sep 2009 18:46:29 +0000

I hope they hurt each other a lot!

By: nancy

nancy — Tue, 15 Sep 2009 18:45:34 +0000

True, true. But how long will it take for Shane to realize that?

By: nancy

nancy — Tue, 15 Sep 2009 18:44:12 +0000

*facepalm*

Thanks, Jess. I can’t tell you how many times my brain inserted the missing “to”. Copyediting FAIL.

By: daymon

daymon — Tue, 15 Sep 2009 18:31:32 +0000

Well I wonder if she will see the vision that he had when she connects with his mind. Here is hoping that they don’t hurt each other to much.

By: Jess

Jess — Tue, 15 Sep 2009 17:59:28 +0000

“As much as Addison had resented Daniel ordering her to take Ashlynn to Kellog, she had admit that he’d chosen well.”

should read

“As much as Addison had resented Daniel ordering her to take Ashlynn to Kellog, she had to admit that he’d chosen well.”

“As much as Addison had resented Daniel ordering her to take Ashlynn to Kellog, she had admitted that he’d chosen well.”

By: anna

anna — Tue, 15 Sep 2009 13:42:01 +0000

If she was in the examination room, then she can’t have been sleeping with Daniel! Take that, Shane!!