Comments on: Chapter 7: Deliverance – part 19

By: daymon

daymon — Tue, 29 Sep 2009 16:14:33 +0000

Oh goodie let the scheming begin. I wonder how Addison is going to get back at him. We know that she is going to try.

Vanessa — Tue, 29 Sep 2009 14:13:08 +0000

No, what’s really scary is how much I enjoy writing his dickishness. He’s my favorite villain.

Vanessa — Tue, 29 Sep 2009 14:12:13 +0000

But as Nancy said, the perks are fantastic. . . I think.

Thanks for the feedback

nancy — Tue, 29 Sep 2009 14:08:24 +0000

Quite right. It’s gone now.

I apologize for all of the typos in this post. Bad editor!

Eonknight — Tue, 29 Sep 2009 14:03:18 +0000

I think there is an extra “the” here:

“Addison stretched her awareness but felt nothing beyond THE his skin against hers…”

nancy — Tue, 29 Sep 2009 13:23:11 +0000

*pouts* I don’t get it. Clue me in, pretty please?

nancy — Tue, 29 Sep 2009 13:22:15 +0000

What’s really scary is how good Vanessa is at writing Daniel’s dickishness. Eek!

nancy — Tue, 29 Sep 2009 13:21:31 +0000

Gah! Typos are the bane of my existence. (Not really, but it makes me feel better saying so.) Thanks for the heads up. They’re fixed now.

Glad you’re enjoying the twists and turns!

nancy — Tue, 29 Sep 2009 13:19:47 +0000

But what about Triptych’s phenomenal benefits package?

Thanks for your kind words, Heidi.

ISIS — Tue, 29 Sep 2009 13:19:45 +0000

Daniel should have a evil villain laugh # 3.

I know a couple of you get that reference and are laughing like crazy