Comments on: Chapter 8: The Devil You Know – part 3

By: Eonknight

Eonknight — Tue, 13 Oct 2009 01:57:39 +0000

Oh, something like that CANNOT not blow up in his face… I’m afraid Shane is creating a new enemy and giving her the means to hurt him too…

By: nancy

nancy — Sat, 10 Oct 2009 17:04:12 +0000

LOL! It was the grammatical variety. Thanks for catching it! Fixed now.

By: Mujaki

Mujaki — Sat, 10 Oct 2009 04:39:01 +0000

Minor grammatical mishap, or perhaps anatomical?
“Her hands clawed at _her_ back as she surrendered…”

By: nancy

nancy — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 21:16:33 +0000

Don’t worry. There will be repercussions. I can’t wait until we get there!

By: Char

Char — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 21:06:25 +0000

Oh, I hope it does. That’s, like, the dick move to end all dick moves. XD

By: daymon

daymon — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 16:11:54 +0000

I was wondering how Shane was couping, he has made Joon into Addison or at least more like her and then shifts her mindset.

Here is to hoping it doesn’t blow up in his face.

By: nancy

nancy — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 15:47:39 +0000

Yeah, Shane’s pretty messed up. He knows it, too. Heh.

By: nancy

nancy — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 15:46:48 +0000

You’re most welcome. Vanessa and I are glad you’re enjoying the story. Thanks for your comments!

By: ISIS

ISIS — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 15:41:44 +0000

Man that dude got issues, thats some f@#ked up shit he is doing to Joon.

By: Gary

Gary — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 12:27:30 +0000

Oh, I can’t wait for Shane & Addison to finally figure out even part of the fact that something is amiss.
The explosions are going to be fun toread.
Their revenge should be very sweet.
It might even bring Ashlynn & Shane together.
Let the games begin!
I am really enjoying your story as you can see.
Thank you.