Comments on: Bonus story: You’ve Got Male!

By: Natalie Ford

Natalie Ford — Sun, 31 Jul 2011 21:55:42 +0000

Yeah, I agree. I hoped that he’d pick Shiva. Then again, knowing Shane…

By: Natalie Ford

Natalie Ford — Sun, 31 Jul 2011 21:53:29 +0000

Typo alert (if you want those):

“then while their melting the chocolate”

…should probably be:

“then while theY’RE melting the chocolate”

…without the caps though, of course.

By: universe hopping: jake’s tales « qazyfiction

universe hopping: jake’s tales « qazyfiction — Sat, 21 Nov 2009 19:50:19 +0000

[...] appeared beside him. Jake jumped, a little startled, but recovered quickly, recognizing Shiva from the bizarre dating show he’d watched several weeks [...]

By: nancy

nancy — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 15:48:18 +0000

LOL! My work here is done. Glad you enjoyed!

By: Eonknight

Eonknight — Thu, 05 Nov 2009 19:01:03 +0000

…catch breath… ribs hurt…

By: nancy

nancy — Wed, 04 Nov 2009 16:18:11 +0000

IMO Rae’s even more aggressive than Addison. That’s a turn-off for Mr. Control Freak.

By: nancy

nancy — Wed, 04 Nov 2009 16:17:37 +0000

Yeah, Shiva was definitely the best choice for him. Shane wimped out because he’s scared of Rae.

By: nancy

nancy — Wed, 04 Nov 2009 16:16:59 +0000

It was kind of forced. Shane’s afraid enough of Rae that he let her “win.” Heh.

By: nancy

nancy — Wed, 04 Nov 2009 16:08:03 +0000

Not this time.

By: Antonious

Antonious — Wed, 04 Nov 2009 04:19:07 +0000

I love the action between the contestants. I am a bit surprised at Shane’s hesitance in response to Rae’s aggressive come on. After all Addison’s aggression seems to match Rae’s.