Comments on: Chapter 8: The Devil You Know – part 13

By: nancy

nancy — Mon, 30 Nov 2009 19:22:35 +0000

This whole space and time thing is annoying, innit?

By: Heidi

Heidi — Mon, 30 Nov 2009 19:14:34 +0000

*tries to wait patiently*

*fails*

OMG, why isn’t it tomorrow yet!?

By: nancy

nancy — Mon, 30 Nov 2009 18:33:23 +0000

All will be revealed tomorrow.

By: daymon

daymon — Mon, 30 Nov 2009 17:37:29 +0000

Well if it was in the air supply, wouldn’t little Jake have the same problem too. Or is there a second componant that was located in his office?

By: nancy

nancy — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 13:48:38 +0000

Copy and paste error FTW! Sorry, guys. Vanessa, thanks for fixing that for me.

By: vanessa

vanessa — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 13:15:57 +0000

Thanks for the feedback. Good to hear that we’re keeping you on the edge of your seat.

I’ve fixed that error now, and thanks for catching it.

By: vanessa

vanessa — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 13:14:38 +0000

Thanks for the error spotting. I believe Nancy is still resting up (lucky duck!), but I fixed it now. (Hopefully, she didn’t mean it to repeat!)

It’s those diligent readers like you who keep us on our toes

By: vanessa

vanessa — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 13:13:18 +0000

I don’t believe that it was. I don’t think that Nancy is awake yet, but I’ve fixed it. Thanks for reading and reporting it!

By: Romain

Romain — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 12:52:33 +0000

Nice one but there is a little proble as the text “By avoiding his quarters as much as possible” is repeated.
Keep working on it I am eager to see how the story will evolve

By: Erynn

Erynn — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 12:48:09 +0000

you repeated ‘By avoiding his quarters…’ twice, you realise.