Comments on: Chapter 10: Comfort and Joy – part 2

By: Eonknight

Eonknight — Thu, 14 Jan 2010 20:41:40 +0000

Right… On the second reading, it is clear, in a non-obvious kind of way (maybe it’s just my French showing ). Perhaps a short line in the previous post establishing that two years have passed since the end of chapter 9 would help?

(cool, fingers stopped stuttering… I can type properly again!;-))

If Shane brings the “promise-keeper” to the party, he’ll have to be extra careful; I doubt the device discriminates which promises, or whose promises, to “internalize”! (This could give rise to very funny misunderstandings…)

By: nancy

nancy — Thu, 14 Jan 2010 15:54:56 +0000

“love polygon” — LOL!

Yes, the Chairmen are quite pleased. Mission accomplished.

By the way, Shane has only had the oath-keeping device for a week or so. Sorry if it wasn’t clear!

By: nancy

nancy — Thu, 14 Jan 2010 15:53:45 +0000

He sort of does. He has at least one ally–Ingrid–and Jake is happy and healthy. But he’s still a broken-hearted grinch. Woe.

By: nancy

nancy — Thu, 14 Jan 2010 15:52:46 +0000

Perzactly.

“over and under and probably side handed dealings” — LOL

By: nancy

nancy — Thu, 14 Jan 2010 15:41:41 +0000

Er… good point about the Christmas tree. I should probably change that.

“Moodier than usual” — lol. He’s just Mr. Grumpypants. Also, Addison’s much better at denial than Shane is.

Thanks as always for your kind words!

By: Alexandra

Alexandra — Thu, 14 Jan 2010 02:56:45 +0000

Yeah! Something tells me it’s coming with him tonight.

By: Eonknight

Eonknight — Wed, 13 Jan 2010 15:59:37 +0000

(hmmm. there are a few question marks missing from my last post… Oh, well, I guesse it’s still intelligible)

Also, I wonder what Shane has done with the “Verbal/Psychic Commitment Internalizing Device” for two years…

By: Eonknight

Eonknight — Wed, 13 Jan 2010 15:54:15 +0000

Already two years? Well, the chairmen must be happy so far…

I wonder how much Ingrid knows about Addison, and I bet that after this party, Addison will make sure she knows all there is to know about Ingrid. Also, who will Teague be with, and what will he think of Addison being with Daniel.

lol… love triangles are twisted enough, but this “love polygon” takes the prize for twisted, convoluted love stories!

By: daymon

daymon — Tue, 12 Jan 2010 21:13:21 +0000

Well this could be interesting party, poor Shane I guess doesn’t have much to celibrate at the moment so it just is a hassle.

By: Isis

Isis — Tue, 12 Jan 2010 17:50:37 +0000

I think such ideas as fall back guy does not take in there world. With so much free loving and backstabbing coupled with your over and under and probably side handed dealings I think a fall back guy is Teague’s least concern.