Comments on: Chapter 11: The Parent Trap – part 8 http://www.strangelittleband.com/2010/03/09/chapter-11-the-parent-trap-part-8/ Two psychics, one mega-corp, all around bad behavior Tue, 02 Aug 2011 01:22:20 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: nancy http://www.strangelittleband.com/2010/03/09/chapter-11-the-parent-trap-part-8/comment-page-1/#comment-1070 nancy Tue, 04 May 2010 14:45:46 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=1354#comment-1070 Wow, thank you Jerry! Glad you're enjoying the story so much. :) Thanks for catching that typo. My brain inserted the word "when" there. Silly brain. It's fixed now. (The typo. Probably not my brain.) Wow, thank you Jerry! Glad you’re enjoying the story so much. :)

Thanks for catching that typo. My brain inserted the word “when” there. Silly brain. It’s fixed now. (The typo. Probably not my brain.)

]]> By: Jerry http://www.strangelittleband.com/2010/03/09/chapter-11-the-parent-trap-part-8/comment-page-1/#comment-1066 Jerry Sun, 25 Apr 2010 17:53:03 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=1354#comment-1066 Fully enjoying the story. I admit that I tend to wait a few weeks then play catch up. Less anxious having to wait for the next post that way :) One thing though, in the 11th paragraph "She was nearly finished she blushed;" Did you perhaps mean "When she was nearly finished she blushed" or perhaps "She was nearly finished when she blushed"? Anyways, thanks for a great way to spend a quiet afternoon reading. :) Fully enjoying the story. I admit that I tend to wait a few weeks then play catch up. Less anxious having to wait for the next post that way :)

One thing though, in the 11th paragraph “She was nearly finished she blushed;” Did you perhaps mean “When she was nearly finished she blushed” or perhaps “She was nearly finished when she blushed”?

Anyways, thanks for a great way to spend a quiet afternoon reading. :)

]]> By: nancy http://www.strangelittleband.com/2010/03/09/chapter-11-the-parent-trap-part-8/comment-page-1/#comment-1015 nancy Tue, 16 Mar 2010 14:09:56 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=1354#comment-1015 LOL! Now you've got me thinking about a SLB musical. Good thing I can't compose. :) LOL! Now you’ve got me thinking about a SLB musical. Good thing I can’t compose. :)

]]> By: nancy http://www.strangelittleband.com/2010/03/09/chapter-11-the-parent-trap-part-8/comment-page-1/#comment-1014 nancy Tue, 16 Mar 2010 14:08:35 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=1354#comment-1014 Same here. Those little scamps! Same here. Those little scamps!

]]> By: nancy http://www.strangelittleband.com/2010/03/09/chapter-11-the-parent-trap-part-8/comment-page-1/#comment-1013 nancy Tue, 16 Mar 2010 14:08:17 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=1354#comment-1013 So glad you enjoyed! R-rated Cleavers. Heh. :) So glad you enjoyed! R-rated Cleavers. Heh. :)

]]> By: Alexandra http://www.strangelittleband.com/2010/03/09/chapter-11-the-parent-trap-part-8/comment-page-1/#comment-1009 Alexandra Fri, 12 Mar 2010 04:09:57 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=1354#comment-1009 Beautifully done! I enjoyed every second! Kind of like when Maria and Captain Von Trapp finally hooked up---but then the Nazis came and ruined everything. I guess the "Nazis" will be banging on Shane and Addison's door soon. *sigh* Beautifully done! I enjoyed every second! Kind of like when Maria and Captain Von Trapp finally hooked up—but then the Nazis came and ruined everything. I guess the “Nazis” will be banging on Shane and Addison’s door soon. *sigh*

]]> By: Scath http://www.strangelittleband.com/2010/03/09/chapter-11-the-parent-trap-part-8/comment-page-1/#comment-1008 Scath Fri, 12 Mar 2010 02:45:35 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=1354#comment-1008 Excellent! I love that the two of them are finally getting along outside of bed. And the two kids' behavior kept making me giggle while reading. ;) Excellent! I love that the two of them are finally getting along outside of bed. And the two kids’ behavior kept making me giggle while reading. ;)

]]> By: Heidi http://www.strangelittleband.com/2010/03/09/chapter-11-the-parent-trap-part-8/comment-page-1/#comment-1006 Heidi Thu, 11 Mar 2010 15:40:11 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=1354#comment-1006 "they were turning into Triptych equivalent of the Cleavers" R-rated Cleavers! Whoo! Love it, love it. it's so NICE to see them happy for a moment. I'm savoring this because I know you two are going to cook up something else and strife shall soon ensue. Which I also look forward too, but a nice pause for candid responses is lovely too. Enjoyable as always, ladies. “they were turning into Triptych equivalent of the Cleavers”

R-rated Cleavers! Whoo!

Love it, love it. it’s so NICE to see them happy for a moment.

I’m savoring this because I know you two are going to cook up something else and strife shall soon ensue. Which I also look forward too, but a nice pause for candid responses is lovely too.

Enjoyable as always, ladies.

]]> By: nancy http://www.strangelittleband.com/2010/03/09/chapter-11-the-parent-trap-part-8/comment-page-1/#comment-1005 nancy Wed, 10 Mar 2010 17:57:19 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=1354#comment-1005 Happy as clams, indeed. Glad you found this part amusing. Vanessa and I had a blast writing it. :D Happy as clams, indeed. Glad you found this part amusing. Vanessa and I had a blast writing it. :D

]]> By: daymon http://www.strangelittleband.com/2010/03/09/chapter-11-the-parent-trap-part-8/comment-page-1/#comment-1002 daymon Tue, 09 Mar 2010 21:47:42 +0000 http://www.strangelittleband.com/?p=1354#comment-1002 Yes that was a tough dinner to get thru, and Jake and Ashlynn weren't helping at all. Then again this has been in the works for a while now, I bet those two imps are just happy as clams now. Oh that was funny, still chuckling here. Yes that was a tough dinner to get thru, and Jake and Ashlynn weren’t helping at all. Then again this has been in the works for a while now, I bet those two imps are just happy as clams now.

Oh that was funny, still chuckling here.

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