Comments on: Chapter 13: Comeuppance – part 5

By: nancy

nancy — Tue, 08 Jun 2010 05:36:33 +0000

Hooray! I’m glad to hear it.

Part 6 will go live in a few minutes. I’m running late this week. That’s what I get for waiting until the last minute to start editing!

Jerry — Tue, 08 Jun 2010 05:28:11 +0000

Whoop! Just caught up again. The story is just as riveting as ever.

Emily — Thu, 03 Jun 2010 19:34:43 +0000

Ouchie! The kids will have to work hard if they don’t want to become orphans. 8(

And yes, I know all you ladies hope that Teague is going to save Addy… I guess we’ll see soon enough.

So Joon is seemingly acting on her own and has gone completely insane. Please, someone just put her out of her misery!

daymon — Tue, 01 Jun 2010 22:46:23 +0000

Yep Joon is very far gone now, Looks like Jake and Ashlynn are going to have to save Addison now.

Things have gotten really tangled now.

Eonknight — Tue, 01 Jun 2010 15:49:14 +0000

Ouchie! The kids will have to work hard if they don’t want to become orphans. 8(

And yes, I know all you ladies hope that Teague is going to save Addy… I guess we’ll see soon enough.

So Joon is seemingly acting on her own and has gone completely insane. Please, someone just put her out of her misery!